Today in class, we took the essay part of our
midterm exam. I think I did okay. Below is the original conclusion from my
essay. Mr. Schick didn't want us to use the words in conclusion, and as
you can see, so I used the words there will always. The note card was very useful, and I got to put all of my key ideas on it. Hopefully I'll get a good grade on this part of the midterm exam.
There will always be issues with
population rates in certain countries, but like issues, there will always be
solutions to problems involving overpopulation/underpopulation. India will have
to give parents who have 1-2 kids a reward such as promotions or raises.
Italy will have to showcase their local attractions for everyone to see. And
Lebanon will have to increase their net migration rate dramatically by allowing
the people more freedom. If all three countries follow this advice, then their
population will stabilize and settle.
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